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Thank God

Thank god that wasn't me she said
while her established smile relaxed her face
and though her mood was optional
she omitted to say she didn't care
and quite liked the image posed in this death
it saved her thinking of decor for the day
or a new rug to cover the floor.
 
Terry

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  • vertigo beat
    September 28, 2007

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    Quotations? I like this write. Not fantastic, but I'd call it lovely. Think you can work on it more.

    • Tercarro
      October 1, 2007
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      I could try

      Thank you for your comments which I welcome very much. It's very nice of you to be open and honest with your thoughts, very helpful indeed.
      Terry


  • Shirley Shaw
    September 28, 2007

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    COOL-WRITE

    SHORT,DIRECT, AND TO THE POINT... LIKED IT MUCH...A GOOD LITTLE WRITE...'GOD BLESS'...LOVE, SHIRLEY ANN SHAW-RAYTOWN,MO....

    • Tercarro
      September 28, 2007
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      Thank you

      Why thank you Shirley Ann Shaw Rayton, very much indeed.
      I am grateful for your comments.
      Terry