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Nightmares

Have u ever felt like u couldn't wake up from a horrible dream,
I have,
I cried,
I sreamed,
I did everything I could do to wake up,
but nothing works,

Sometimes nightmares can lock u in,
never let u out,
Until u beg mercy,
Until u give in,

I keep pushing,
never give up,
until the nightmare is tired of me.

What do u feel when u read this

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  • Lost Emo
    February 15, 2008

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    wow awesome. i love the simple affect that u creat so early on with

    I have,
    I cried,
    I sreamed,

    just awesome. And i love the idea of u making the nightmare tired of u instead of it making u scared. great write