Desolate queen and unholy prince,
creatures whose darkness rivals my own.
'My blood I give to you as a gift,
come, take your place by my throne.'
'In anticipation of your first duty,
I beg of you, do your worst.
I expect him torn inside out,
with the most despicable curse!'
Flashing them a fear laced glance,
'fail me not, in this your first quest,
Or I'll rip out your inadequate tongues,
and with the living dead, you'll know not rest'.
With sickly smiles, you take your leave,
my plan unfolds, darker than dark.
Shortly I will wreak my revenge,
eternally you'll burn and spark.
So soon they return, I recognize you not,
lips decayed, now who's clever?
Eyes intact, my only request,
see? Yes, speak? No, die? NEVER!
Author notes
I hate my ex.....
A contest entry
- I WANT SOMETHING DARK AND SCARY AND FRIGHTENING by esroddo.
475 points, ended September 29, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - HATE by lesbian-in-love.
565 points, ended November 5, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats on your HM!!This is intense and Thrilling.The Imagery is superb as well as the penning.
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Well written. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Not much about Jesus in this one, is there? No mention of God punishing people! That's the sort of stuff we want to hear about!
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Super dark piece
You have a way with words well enjoy with the evil touch, thank you for entering and good luck
LISA
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BRAVO!!!!
Definately dark enough for me. I love the.... kind of mid-evil touch you put into this. lol.
I dont really know if that is what you were aiming for.
But this is very unique and interesting... and I believe you just broke me through my writers block thank you.
you did a wonderful job and I hope to see you in future contest.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Wicked!
Absolutely amazing!
Good Luck
~sugar~
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Ok you're starting to scare me
LOL this is another incredibly
darkly delicious write!!
Perfect in every creeepy way!
I'm so proud lol
I love it!
~Pastel
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