With delicate strum
you softly murmur
to my soul,
fragile voice still resonates
in warmth
my spirit touches.
Never are you far away
such memories
held close
within this
weeping heart,
yet starlit are
true bonds embraced,
shining brighter
for your absence.
Presiding over
all we shared,
along the path
to new horizons,
I feel your handhold
grasping me,
for there is no demise,
you are my shadow,
I am at peace.
Author notes
Be inspired by my poem entitled
"Dead Stars"
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3276228
In a list
A contest entry
- Dead Stars by Virgoan.
500 points, ended October 12, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I hope by the time I get through your list, I can return to this one and say... Oh, how I can relate... but sadly at this moment, peace is not something I feel, in fact far from it.
Despite how I feel personally, the poem is very well written and I look forward to returning to it sometime soon and reading it with a different set of eyes so that the intended beauty radiates from the page.
Congrats on that Honorable Mention!
Suzi
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More than beautiful. I like how you narrate and personify life and its bits and pieces.
Well done poet.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck.
VIRGOAN
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You write with such palpable emotion in your pieces it is hard not to be dragged into the moment with you, just a wonderful write her hun, again goodluck with your entry to the contest
Karen
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that waz guud
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