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Involuntary Closing

Longing eyes
and lips that ache
for passion's
trembling kiss

won't see, nor taste
feast prepared
by caring hands
amiss


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  • Malabu
    September 29, 2007

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    I like this

    I do believe both will eventually come... food for thoughts are very well expressed...and much is left to imagination...such as this...excellent write...
    Mal


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    September 28, 2007

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    Very clever and a fabulous take on the prompt. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterflydreams.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 28, 2007
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    Fab little piece, best of luck in the contest!