With swirling core we radiate
flourishing out in dreams of connection
as pinwheels cycle in true direction
spin in wondrous, blazing aspect.
Addicted to creation's harmony
across the universe seeking souls
to entwine in genuine symmetry
to merge in seamless flow of universe.
In kaleidescope of whirling grace
unity in elation is moulded.
A contest entry
- IT'S A QUICKIE! 10/10/24 by HarvesterOfHearts.
400 points, ended October 1, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly, more light here i find, spinning like a star, creation smiles as the colours collide.
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Wonderfully expressed.
Congrats on the HM.
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The pic is awesome, the poem is even better. You have really opened the imagination with this write, and its flow is very good my friend. You got my vote. Oh and bye the way...You have been hoodwinked by a bandit!
PS> You are also a beautiful Greeter Alice, your friend always...GETS
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I like the thought of pinwheels cycling. This is very profound in thought. Good luck in the contest dear poet.
Midnight Lace -
i really love the take you had in this poem. it is so different than anyother poem. it is great. it has such a form of mystery around it. and a dark aura. it is great.
best of luck
theharvester
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