Stare into my bloodshot eyes
See what's underneath
Reflections of terror stare back at you
I love to hear your screams
Tied and bound you can't resist
The terror as it creeps
Choking you with bitter tears
As oblivion looms, it seems
Hear the sharpening of the blade
Watch the sparks fly high
Sweat breaks out upon your flesh
Your fear gets me high
I want to carve your pretty face
Wear it like a mask
Drink the luscious blood from you
while fucking your bloody arse
Look at me, see what I see
Your fear filled, sweaty face
Watch the knife come crashing down.....
You're free, now leave this place
Author notes
http://www.photocasket.com/eyes/coldeye9lb.jpg
I wanted to add a twist in the end....
A contest entry
- Dark Pic Inspired by Tattboyspet.
800 points, ended October 11, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sweet pic, haha.
I like this a lot, probably because of all the blood...^_^
great piece, as always, and I loved the twist at the end! -
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Thanks again kat
That was the only pic that spoke to me, because the eye can see so many things, so I imagined it as my eye..... Glad you enjoyed this piece, and yeah, the last line can be taken 2 ways.....
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love the flow of this piece. and that picture freaky yet kewl lmao. great job here dmonik.
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Thanks Bell. Out of all the pics, that was the one that spoke to me, lol. Glad you like this piece. I tried to write the last line so it could be taken two ways Thanks for the happy clappy dudes
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get over the happy clappy dudes I'm not the only one giving them lmao.
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good write, great flow :-) and I love the ending
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Thanks Wolfy Glad you like this piece, and thanks for heads-up on that part
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Yeah, I like this one! My favorite form of torture: THE BLADE! LOL
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Blades and hands are the most intimate forms of torture. if you're going to torture or kill, don't do it with a gun, that's so impersonal, after all, YOU'RE wanting to hurt them, not a piece of lead. Glad you like this Sis
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hehehe, exactly!!
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nice take on the pic - thank you for your entry
you could've been talking from a serial killers point of view here too
twisted and mindless
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