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The Plumbers Glistening Mantra

I can smell your pipes clogged,
the odor covers the town.
The neighbors called for you
because they want the problem to go away

So I'll rush right over there
bring my snake to clean out the hair,
then getting out the clog
to dispense it from there.

So you once again can say yours sanitary,
so the town will smell nice,
and the neighbors will smile.

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  • Poemdancer
    October 24, 2007

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    interesting write, very descriptive, though i didn't have to run to the toilet in disgust and that's good. Nonethless a great write!


  • Wind Walker
    October 24, 2007
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    I am soo sorry

    I wrote this tongue in cheek with mistakes as part of the sarcastic humor.
    However, to those sniviling nit pickeres who fail to appreciate it and Nazi who complains he does not understand it - you have my sympathy- I think, maybe.
    I have since corrected my purposeful mistakes so you have less to complain about, even though, to me, it makes it less funny. After all it is not about me and my poetry, it is all about you! ! ! ! ! ! !


  • Mad Pastor Grovell
    October 23, 2007
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    P-L-U-M-B-E-R.


  • Bartholomew Mole
    October 22, 2007
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    This is illiterate. Nor is it funny. What does it mean?


    • Wind Walker
      October 24, 2007
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      Reichs Führer Mole

      I am so glad you can say it is all of those things and still you do not know what it means. Maybe it is Jewish propaganda to confuse your surperior mind, or just Slavic drivel to confound you. I'm sure it is nothing for you to pull your blond hair out by the roots by. I am surprised you even bothered to take the time with it


      • Bartholomew Mole
        October 25, 2007
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        Your comment is deeply offensive, but then what would I expect from someone dressed up in a Klu Klux Klan uniform? Your spelling really is the funniest thing about you.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 22, 2007
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    graet need to show my uncle this hes a plummber


  • B.bdawn
    September 28, 2007

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    hahaha i loved it, desgusting and humerous. Awesome mix. Just a few minor spelling errors here and there, but that wont change anything. I enjoyed this. Thanks for entering, and good luck!

  • Figaro
    September 28, 2007
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    The plumber loves his work - a fun read.

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