Offering You my soul with gratitude
i hand over my body for Your pleasure
my mind is Your colourful playground
For Your tender domination to control
Accepting your offered soul I smile
Cupping your chin as I receive your body
I stare into your eyes and stroke your mind
My subtle domination controlling through caring
Love in Your eyes invites contentment my way
Pain is Your contribution to sate my frown
Submission my bid to ensure Your smile
You collar my essence with significant ease
Love’s spark connecting O/our eyes
As pain soothes away your cares
Smiling I acknowledge your submission
Placing the collar around your neck
You show me love with supremacy and tender flesh
Allowing my spirit to fly with You as its guide
You now own my spirit with gentle acceptance
Your understanding of my needs makes me complete
Love of a different complexion
Helping you to grow into your true self
Cherishing your soul as I hold it in My hand
Completing you as I lead you into submission
Author notes
Verses 1, 3 and 5 were written by My pet. Verses 2, 4 and 6 were My response to her beautiful words.
In a list
A contest entry
- Calling....All AP Couples by Ephiphany.
660 points, ended September 30, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a wonderful poem very powery
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Awesome, simply awesome a very powerful demonstration of the beautiful partnership only found in BDSM. A shining example for those shallow and narrow minds that don't see the tenderness, love and affection. Oh and nice to read You at last Tattboy and a quick wavies to pet
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I loved it. It was very good. The idea is very sweet. Look forward to reading more xx
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there,
i just knew it could work. thak ye both for expressing such beautiful bonding... for indeed, 'tis a bond of love aye, but of trust and ... this lass would say mayhap stronger, more lasting then some other types of rrelationships out there. ye both humble me,
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Magnificent
Wow - thank you both for this thoroughly moving write. It would work so well as vows at a collaring ceremony
Your love shines through, as do the trust and submission freely given and gratefully received, and the responsibility of nurturing through domination.
I love to see the depth of your love and your D/s. It makes my heart glad
Love,
Moira
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Beautiful write and written so sensually. It made me think of how beautiful sharing tender moments can be when two people love each other wholly and completely. Good luck in the contest.
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Love the Title and your border background
this was wonderful, so full of imagery and exactly what I love in romantic poetry. Thank you so much for entering, wonderful job u 2
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Wonderfully written. I haven't logged on in months. Glad to see you are both going well!
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Hi,
Yes W/we are both doing wonderfully.
Not on here for months? Shame (in a South Effrikan accent) about time you wrote some poems then.
D
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Wonderful words Master ... thank You for allowing this
Forever in Your service,
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W/we do make a good team don't W/we?
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