The Fading sun
The rising moon
The glowing stars
The reflection of you
I love your eyes
From Dusk to dawn
You were mine
But the day had ended
Though much to soon
The fading time
You had left
Was spend with me
I saw your last breath
Your smile, said goodbye
The tears I didn't cry
Ohhhh they ate me up
I died inside
You watched the sun set
I watched you
You Watched the moon rise
I never took my eyes off of you
I saw that smile in your eyes
I loved you more then you will ever know
Now every day
I wake up and watch the sun rise
And I can see the smile in your eyes
And every day
I watch the sun set, and the moon rise
And I feel the love
The love I have for you inside!!
Author notes
Contest Info- (Brother, Option 1,3 mixed kinda)
This may come by as lost love but if you really read it, the love was never lost, it was found!
A contest entry
- Looking For An AP Family by broken-colours.
450 points, ended October 1, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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"You Watched the moon rise
I never took my eyes off of you
I saw that smile in your eyes
I loved you more then you will ever know."
Such an incredible mix of thoughts, together to form one beautiful and vivid poem. In short, I adore this. Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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