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just a little messed up

burning in your head
these thoughts won't disappear
refusing to dissipate
just to spite
your poor needy self
with images soon to burst
sticky streams of dreams
tear up the words
because nothing makes sense anymore
lost in the mentality
of these paranoid delusions
of less than grandeur
this isn't me.

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agh, i felt it's been way too long since i've written. lo siento, but school's been insane. i haven't tapped my muse in ages, it feels like. grrr.
(so basically. if this sucks. its okay. i just need to get in to it again.)

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  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    October 28, 2007

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    It doesn't suck, not at all. It just a reflection of possibly something you aren't pleased with, things about yourself. We all have those thoughts and feelings, and you've described them quite well.