Shadows;
drifting all around,
but when they walk;
there is no sound.
Darkness;
peering through the light,
it is the birth;
of an early night.
Loneliness;
is hissing in my mind;
these darkened thoughts
I can't unwind.
Death;
Is wandering through my soul,
slicing softly,
'til it takes it's toll.
Shadows;
drifting all around,
but when they walk;
there is no sound.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 15 and Under ONLY ~ Win A Gold Membership in our Halloween Contest! by Amunet Wolfbane.
6000 points, ended November 14, 2007, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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The imagery is rich here and you've got the flow going pretty well. I really enjoyed delving into this piece. Excellent job and best of luck to you.
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This has a very dark and eerie feeling to it. You have brought something out that is sure to make the readers shiver. Well done! Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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This one has a very dark and deep feeling to it, and it made me wonder if this hasn't got some very personal things captured along the theme too?
If so, then I hope things will get better for you soon!
Thank you for entering this contest - I wish you the best of luck!
Leander
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