Candies
Filling up sacks
Getting ready to eat
Some of many delicious treats
Tootsie rolls, atomic bombs, are just some
And my belly says to me, "Yum!"
Come on and have some fun!
So many stuffing
Candies
Author notes
Option 2, choice C.
11 years old
A contest entry
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Great Rictameter! I really enjoyed this piece. Your syllables were spot on and it was a pleasure to read. I believe I’ve gotten a bit to old to partake in so much candy myself LOL But you’ve done a great job here.
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Fabulous job on the syllables in this one. It is quite impressive and very well done. I must say, this is halloween. Bravo!
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I tried this form once and boy did it give me a headache trying to count all the syllables
It appears you have done it perfectly here...you leave me evious
Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Ooh, a rictameter I think you've done a great job with this rictameter in fact
as far as I can count right, the syllables seem perfect
Thank you for entering the contest, and the best of luck to you
Leander -
Very unique
I loved this poem it made me hungry for a snack
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nice
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:)) Great Rictameter! I love it!
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nice visual with the diamond shape. i love it when poems are like that. it adds a certain something to the poem. and how atomic bombs are right in the center is also quite intriguing. its also nicely done that candies is the first and last line of the poem.
nice work
~love -
so many stuffing candies sounds nice and i like the form
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Ummmm its that Rictameter not Ricameter?
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Yummy! I think this is awesome and deliciously sweet. I haven't had a tootsie roll in ages but oh how I love them. You have awakened my sweet tooth. Good luck in the contest!
♥ Touchof1der -
hehe still giggling! Very nicely done! I love the 5th and 6th lines.
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