He is so beautiful with broad shoulders,
strong arms and gentle hands
I could hold forever.
He hung the moon with those hands,
he put the stars into the night,
and lit up my world.
Of all the things I've seen,
there are none that compare
to the features of his face.
His eyes hypnotize me,
like the darkest chocolate
strengthening my desire to kiss him.
His mouth is warm and his kisses
soft and delicious,
sweeter than any food could ever be.
I could live off his kisses,
his hugs and his love for eternity
he is all I need to live.
Words fail to describe him accurately,
for there are no words as lovely
as my darling love is to me.
Author notes
Sister, hopefully =)
A contest entry
- Looking For An AP Family by broken-colours.
450 points, ended October 1, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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That is incredibly sweet! Comparing your love to many things in nature.... wow. The imagery is magnificent. Thanks very much for entering my contest & good luck to you!
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ooo lala
sounds scrumptious!
nothing awkward your words sound true rom your heart... and loins... heehee
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