Tease me slowly,
My body quivers in anticipation.
Kiss me softly,
As I drip with desperation.
Bite me till I bleed,
Smile as I giggle.
The blood begins to tickle,
As it begins to trickle,
Down my silky flesh,
Caress it with your hands.
Fulfill your naughty wish,
Carry out your dirty plans.
Throw me to the dirt,
Pull my matted hair.
Mouth-fuck me till you squirt,
Slice my skin, make it tear.
Pull me to your lips,
Taste your sweet candy.
Grasp these tender hips,
Dig your fingers inside me.
Harder, faster, on the verge,
Juices swell within.
Moan as I satisfy every urge,
As I mark passion upon skin.
Thrust in deep,
Feel my insides twitch.
Taste the bitter sweetness,
Scratch that blissful itch.
Your fingers grip and clasp,
I know your almost there.
A gentle squeal, a silent gasp,
Then into my eyes you stare.
For I'm the nasty girl,
The dirty, sexy slut.
I am nothing to this world,
But am everything you want.
Author notes
About my boyfriend...
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that was ho
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yes i've experienced it
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That was fucking nasty raw. But cool : )
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Wow
I will admit Tasha this is one very tantilizing well penned erotic poem! What really made this an attractive hard core style poem was the very interesting wording you used through out your poem but in a good way. you gave us detail to a certain degree but did not make it extremely bad that we would cringe at the vert thought of wanting the exact same thang. any ways very nice work all round and keep up the good work and best of luck in the contest. Signed, Paul
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That was a turn on, excellent writing - it's sexy and dirty. I'm inviting you to an erotica contest, my friend is hosting and I think you'd like it.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2371694
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WOW. weather written out of fantasy or of one to many lonely nights we cant be sure, but that, was, amazing.
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this was incredible! it kinda turned me on but anyway it was just the best erotica I ever read...usually when I read one I just get bored with it, but I could feel your lust in this!! P.S. I like your style lol
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lol really.....that's awsome never thought I'd write erotica well enough to get people all hot and bothered lolz
xxx tash
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I CANT QUIT READING THIS, ITS SOOOO GREAT! makes me want to go home and grab my lover.....(sexy smile)
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i could tell that this poem is personal to you. the last two lines stood out to me, because your pleasure of sexual acts with your significant other bring a physical and emotional fulfillment. this shows a desire to be dominated (being "teased") and at the same time a dominant side (because of the active voice in the choice of words)
sublime
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line 11 you have a misspelling but your writing is freat i love your work!
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Awesome!!!
Heya! This was a great poem and I really enjoyed reading this. It flowed very smoothly and your words were strong, powerful and emotional as well. I could feel each and every emotion as well as sexual act that was happening as I was reading through the poem. You are a very talented author and I enjoyed reading this. Your emotions were clear and I could tell that this poem was very personal to you. Keep writitng your talented, thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck.
~Chrissy~
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interesting for sure but, i feel as if something is missing. it shows the weakness of wemen who like it rough and how they might feel when it's all done but, it doesn't show what you might get from the intence way it's worded. good job tho and keep it up.
Nana Nicole Ramsey
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okay firstly i think that this poem shows strength yes it may say to use me and blah blah but dont even think for a second that I'm not vicious right back....and just becuase i like it to be dominated doesn't mean I'm not dominent....lol but I'm glad you liked the poem......keep writting and keep reading
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Tash-xx
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enjoyable. i didnt think anyone could write anything in this catagory that i would like but this one i loved. good use of honesty and words.
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Omg, i love this!! soo sluty perfect!!! its great
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wow thats intence hun I liked it! really great and if this is experiance it must be amazing sex keep writing!
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"For I'm the nasty girl,
The dirty, sexy slut.
I am nothing to this world,
But am everything you want. "
I love the honesty here.
Good work.
Good luck in the contest.
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Wow
This is one steamy write. The imagery was hot, the rhyming was good for the most part (within - porcalin dont fit well) the first stanza is my fav! "Tease me slowly,
My body quivers in anticipation.
Kiss me softly,
As I drip with desperation"
HOT HOT HOT
Keep it up!!!
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Awesome--i htink this is amazing--good luck in the contest
Tease me slowly,
My body quivers in anticipation.
Kiss me softly,
As I drip with desperation.
my fav lines
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