Eyes inspired by the inviting sight of salivating succulence
seeing in the alluring traces of some savory sensual sweetness,
ambrosia's divine flame speaking such hints of gratification.
She holds the feast beyond dreams in her delicious outline
just one touch is enough to ripple the appetite in quaking hunger
until a single taste burns its ravenous inferno inside.
Then comes the moment of purest rapture
when the fingers are allowed to explore all the secrets
hidden in the crannies of her wondrous pleasures,
turning the key to paradise, sports car cruise such sugary rush.
Author notes
Prompt - dessert
A contest entry
- PIF 10/60/10 word prompt by Michael A.
300 points, ended September 29, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very well written, love the flow and language. thanks for sharing. -
yummy now I am heading to my kitchen for some home baked pie! If this doesn't wet someones appetite I don't know what will!!!!!
Excellent
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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This made me hungry, lol
Dessert is VERY tempting, is it not?
All the best to you in the contest -
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Thank so much for the great comment.
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