BUTTER my FINGER with your soft, crisp tongue.
Drip your CADBURY CARAMELLO down my arm.
Nibble my vanilla, like a CHARLESTON CHEW.
I know I love you.
Go down and taste my CHERRY MASH.
Oh, what a chocolate blast.
I wanna taste your Gob stopping, SWEETTART.
As you CHUCKLE, "You got my heart"
I'm gonna give you GOOD an PLENTY,
On this FIFTH AVENUE tonight.
Don't worry baby, I won't bite.
Author notes
Option 1
A contest entry
- PIF 10/60/10 word prompt by Michael A.
300 points, ended September 29, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me go "ooh!!"...(Adults Only)-Prewrites Welcome! by Daizy21.
450 points, ended October 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I feel like Charlie at the chocolate factory LOL!! What a sweet (pun intended) write this is. Playful and sexy. ~ good luck in the contest
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That is Fun
This was fun to read this morning! The title is fun for the poem Candy Coated Fantasy then the first line
Butter my with your soft, crisp tongue then the last line Don't worry baby, I won't bite. Fun and I hope you win the contest. stavykm
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Lots of candy in this write - oohhh....
Liked the rhythm,, rhyme and flow of these lines - easy to read and understand what is implied in this poem - someone who can't turn candy away....
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very well done
love the candy referenced through piece, i like them all lol very entertaining write, thanks for sharing. -
Pretty wild
I never thought of basing a poem like this around candy bars but if it works
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