Ooey Gooey happiness
In a wide-mouth silver spoon;
The whole bowl filled with Coco Wonder,
Butterscotch Dreams,
and Fluffy Cream Regressions.
One bite, and the entire world looks bleak;
There is naught to compare with this invigorous treat.
The effect soon dwindles,
Though my new addiciton is stated,
And once more I take a taste of heaven.
A contest entry
- PIF 10/60/10 word prompt by Michael A.
300 points, ended September 29, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
^_^
Comments
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I Love It!
I can really see why this was a silver trophy winner as this is just a really gnarly poem * suddenly gasps at himself saying gnarly * Lmao! any ways well I just love this poem alot. I really like your wording and really love the over all complexity to this poem. I really am impressed by your poetry here and really admire the quality of a trophy winning award work. any ways good work and keep it up
Signed, Paul
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very very nice
loved the take on he prompt and the flow of this piece. thank you for sharing.
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