Your eyes, inspiring
Your touch, desiring
Your heart, Im craving
Your love, im slaving
Your voice, im consuming
Its you, Im persuing
I want you now
I want you here
I ask myself how
Its something i fear
This emtiness inside
Its usually here
It runs and hides
when you are near
You are my north
As i am south
And magnetic poles NEVER die out
Author notes
Just about a guy i used to be like in love with Lol
magnetic poles are strong. love is strong. just a comparisson
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wow!!! i love it...
as you read the last line.... i dont no but its as if it all makes so much sense.
brilliant metaphore relating never ending love to 'magnetic poles'
great write
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Wow. Yes. A very strong comparison you have here, Ms. Ashley. I loved this poem...the raw emotion behind it, almost as if one is quite obsessed with being in love with another. A good piece. Great job.
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thanks. that was a very nice comment.
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