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You And Me

As the seasons change,
I stand here along the waters edge.
Yearning for you,
Though I know it will never happen.

You and me.

Tension builds as my thoughts run wild,
Far from being content in every way.
The newness of my attitude is something,
I guess you did'nt like.
Yesterday I was someone you wanted to love,
Today, I am not.
As I stand here,
Rapture from the sun beaming down upon me,
My belief today is that we will never be.

You and me.

So I stand here at my lonely haven.

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  • PureCountry
    October 11, 2007

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    I Like

    the fact that you pen freestyle so well. I cannot seem to write in this format, but love it when others pull it off. You've done just that. With your use of nature and emotion running throughout, no one could be dissappointed by this write.


  • FindingFaith
    October 5, 2007

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    Thank you for the entry. We all have lonely moments. I wish you well. God Bless...


  • Mykeee
    October 4, 2007

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    Got the feeling of seeing a slow tear fall from your eyes think of "You and Me". This was a sad tell but written with great emotions. Good luck!! ~ Mykeee


  • stavykm gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    So Sad

    Oh the feelings and emotions of life are up and down and all around so it seems the title is perfect You and Me than the first line As the seasons change, I really like that line than the last line So I stand here at my lonely haven. I like how you had nature in this poem as well. Excellent write of loneliness and pain. Thank you for sharing your gift with me. God Bless Kelle Marie, stavykm