Blue eyes squinted daintily in an attempt to make out other faces in the massive crowd; Eriu was pounding at this time of night. Her vision adjusted to the black-light enhanced flashing red lights over the club’s pulsing dance floor, and she immediately spotted new prey-- a young, fish-out-of-water up and coming business executive with time to spare and from the looks of it, a D/s fetish. She slid smoothly by a waiter holding a crystal platter, sitting a bloody mary on it and curling her lips in satisfaction. Tonight would be easy fun indeed.
She hugged her abdomen softly to demurely emphasize certain well-maintained attributes. Her expression was altered to one of timidity and shyness before she caught the man’s eyes. Once this would have been difficult to manage, but that was long ago. Tonight she toyed with men like the bastard whores they all were.
Biting her lip in a seemingly unsure manner, she noted his proceeding interest.
The wavy strands of hair that framed her face swished across the velvet straps of the corset that framed and called attention to her C cup chest. The black cloth that covered her abdomen was shredded and gave view to her soft curves. Her ruffled, burgundy skirt was short enough to show the garters holding up her school girl thigh-highs.
He came closer, and as he neared she smelled his cinnamon cologne. “Want to dance?” He had to yell to be heard even though he was less than a foot away. “Sure-- I’m Rei..” She trailed off in a show of uncertainty. By the glitter in his eye she guess he bought the act hook, line, and sinker, which was exactly as she wanted. He could think he was the predator. For now. He gripped her elbow firmly, flexing his biceps as he led her deeper into the middle of the club. “What’s...What’s your name?” She stuttered, looking up into his face with doe eyes. “You may address me as Gryddr,” he murmured. Rei blinked. Why did that sound so familiar?
Gryddr smirked at her befuddled look but did not otherwise acknowledge it, choosing instead to pull her close against him. Rei could feel his hardness through the out-of-place black slacks he wore and slipped a finger through the belt loop closest to his dick. His intake of breath didn’t surprise her-- so far, he was textbook-- but his arms knocking her hands away did. “What--” She started to object, but he shoved his hands onto her face and crushed her protests with his lips. Oh. He moved faster than most of the greenhorns she‘d encountered. Maybe this one would actually grow some balls.
Rei kissed back and moaned into his mouth. Gryddr grabbed her ass, pulling her onto one of his thighs. She gasped when his fingers crept up her garter belt and to the top of her white silk panties. Her breath hitched-- he was good, dammit. Pity she couldn’t take him for a ride. Pulling away, she grabbed the hand that was halfway inside her underwear and licked his index finger. She watched him open his mouth-- to say something, to moan, she didn’t know-- and put her hand over his lips. “Shh..” She cocked an eyebrow and backed away. “I’ve never been one for sharing,” Rei laughed, and melted into Eriu’s crowd with a bitter smile.
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All I have to say is I wish more people would write like you.


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wow, thanks!
Mucho appreciated!!
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nice story. i like the twist at the end. i wasnt expecting it.
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WAO
this one is a true brain-twister!!!excellent job! I really admire the extended vocabulary you made use of in here and the sustained rhythm of ideas...well done indeed!
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Thanks!!!!
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Curious
Not really a poem, but a great story none the less. Your language is very evocative...brings the reader highs and dives kind of like the ones you'd get in a place this club...from the music or otherwise.
But I want to know...is there more? You hooked me in and then left me wanting. Like Rei did. You can't leave it there. This is a great story and it deserves to be more complete.
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Thanks! I forgot to put that it's not a poem in the shameless promo. I definately have more where that came from, and you can catch more of Rei in my story Black Lace, I just posted this because I got a new computer and didn't have what I've written on the next Black Lace chapter saved onto this one yet to be able to tie it in and expand on Gryddr and that whole thing. 
I shall write more tomorrow though, once I copy my files to this comp.
Wow, I typed a lot in this reply! Sorry ^_^
Shutting up now.
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Beautiful, of course. I wanna know who Gryddyr is. *pokes you*


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