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A Fall

Tears roll down her face
A fall from grace
Life stripped away
Slowly she begins to decay
Feeling unloved
Life as she knows it floats above
Days pass her by
Everyday she crys
Nolonger can she get by
No strengh to even try
Slowly her soul dies

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  • eleno
    September 27, 2007

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    i love this. it is so sad, u must have been really down when you wrote this. im sorry you were but yet, it is really beautiful because of the deep sadness of it. thanx