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Melody of life

You are the melody of my life without you I find no rest ~

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  • Virgoan
    September 27, 2007
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    I like this in its concise and direct approach. Lots of imagery

    I suggest you change it's form/presentation:

    You are-
    the melody-
    of my life.

    Without you,
    I find no rest.

    Just my suggestion

    Thanks for sharing and keep on writing my friend.

    VIRGOAN