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I Arose

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I AROSE

Each day Father, creator of all, rises,

breathes in the wonder of his children.

Young n’ old, small n ‘tall.

 

He makes a cup of coffee, sits down, reads the daily newsletter,

waiting to be briefed. 

Angels all around him holding what looks like empty glass jars?

 

He then with much boldness does say,

"Tell me now, each and every name pointing to the empty glass jars?"

 Each angel does reply with a deep sigh in their humming voice.

 

Father God, Creator of all rises, spreads out his arms, issuing his orders.

He takes the glass jars removing  lids carefully.

Deeply drinks in each and every sip, each and every salty tear.

 

"The time is now my children, your hearts, your ears are open wide.

This is now your season to heal

all wounds inside your shattered hearts,

inside your confusion thoughts,

confess your weaknesses quietly,

find a silent place to ease your troubled minds.

 

I     am     your     living     god

Come to me fearless, come to me bold,

 for I speak within you a Quiet Inner Voice.

 Much I have given you

 and

 Much I do expect.

It is through your tears that I bestow Strength, Great Courage

that you may rise,  stand tall,  not fall,  fail or  perish.

 

I AROSE.

 

 

 

Author notes

It wasn't my intent to get "preachy" I just wanted to
share my morning thoughts and what my innervoice is
teaching me, if you can relate, that's fine if not
that's fine too...because each of us must listen to
our Own innervoice. I have respect for you and me too.
After writing this, I got up turned on some fun pounding
loud music and danced about the room!
The pic is one of my quiet places, Bear Lake Utah,
you can jump on your dirt bike and ride to the top,
and enjoy a breathtaking view. Very untouched lake.

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Life gets so darn busy, sometimes we need to stop and listen for our quiet innervoice?

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  • Menace
    November 30, 2007
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    Thanks for inviting me to read this. If you say your God drinks coffee then I believe you. I think God is more normal than we give credit. He is not the mad scientist so many percieve and we are not an ant farm. A little mushy for me, but very good imagery. Keep it up!

  • Amarige
    November 2, 2007
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    You wrote an excellent piece here. best of luck in the contest. and the view is gorgeous!


  • gcpirelli
    November 2, 2007

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    Great, excellent emotion and expression. Personally I am not religious so please undersand I don't buy the whole God thing. I enjoyed the poem though and respect your faith, perhaps he does help some.


  • Stickboy gold member
    November 2, 2007

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    This a very beautiful write my dear friend, you let your ink and your faith flow best of luck in this contest


  • Bas
    November 2, 2007

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    beautiful

    very beautiful , touching , i can feel the warmth as i am here now sipping on my coffee and thinking of what the lord has done for me today and each day as i awake and arise and start a new day , i know that this has cam straight from your heart and thank you for sharing this with me


  • slipperssun gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    i love the way that your innervoice spoke to you. this pic does indeed look like a terrific place to think. thank you for the entry into my contest and i wish you well
    cheers
    jen


  • Talking Toni gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    What A Great Message.............

    you have sent my way tonight.. I have been struggling with what I am to do for the Lord in that what his will for my life is. I am blocking bigtime and want to write more for him. This renewed my faith in a way that tells me to be still and know that he is God always in control of every situation in our lives. He knows the desires of our hearts because he put them there in our genetic make up. Your faith shines brightly in this piece and I thank you for sharing it with me tonight!!!~~Toni~~


  • ZachP gold member
    September 27, 2007

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    You're right... we do need to stop and listen to that little voice inside of us... because it is His voice that will guide us to riteousness and blessing... a nice scribe, there's something about it that just makes it amazing!

    I wish you the very best... may you be blessed by your innervoice.

    Love&Blessings
    Zach

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