Who knew having someone so close to you
could affect you so much
a slight jolt, a shiver
from just the softest touch
Your breathing starts to quicken
for some reason mine speeds up
Into your eyes my mind's driven
Your soul I've poured into a cup
Softly slowly tauntingly
you look away from me
knowing only only
I want you
next to me
Can feel that melodic rhythymn
inticing thump and thump
Into your eye's I'm driven
Into your soul I'll jump
Forever and ever this second will last
And i shall crave nothing more
Sustenence i find on your lips
just as you'll find sand on a shore
A contest entry
- Take time to move me; by bonjourbunnie.
425 points, ended October 6, 2007, 28 entries
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Comments
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I enjoyed the rhyme and rhythym of the poem, as well as the adorable theme. A very cute pen, and I enjoyed it very much. Good luck!
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