Look at her there,
So tantalizingly curvaceous,
So beautiful with her dazzling red hair.
Her body oh so perfect,
Busty; slender waist; curving hips,
Unblemished alabaster skin.
So soft, so warm,
Sweating as she dances for me,
Filling the air with her scent.
...so like fresh baked bread...
Pull her close with tight fist,
Hear her moan as she draws near,
Feel her warm and wet beside me.
Kiss her hungry lips,
Bite her neck; hear her gasp,
Lick the sweet skin, heading down.
Past her supple bosom,
Down her sexy navel,
Taste her warm and tangy essence.
...more intoxicating than any vodka...
Feel the pain as her hands pull my hair,
Taste the flood as she moans,
Bite down and feel her writhe.
Pull away and shove her down,
Fuck her hard and fast,
Watch her eyes roll as I thrust home.
Pull out and hold her down,
Hands above her head,
Licking her body and tasting her sweating pleasure.
...oh, Gods, but she tastes so SWEET...
Lower myself to her lips,
Hungrily she sucks,
Moaning as she pleases me.
Hold her still,
Dragging strong fingers up her thighs,
Pushing into her, letting her moan to me.
Slip out, reach beside me,
Clasp the shining silver blade,
Spasm as she works her naughty magic.
Feel myself begin to burst,
Run the blade across her throat,
Killing as I cum.
...Another Angel Sent Home to Heaven...
Author notes
i wrote this for a contest, it is NOT real and i WOULD NOT do this to someone. it was inspired by a book and some songs and this one really, realy amusing dream...yeah im messed up i know.
if i have offended you you should not have read a poem called sadistic euthanasia and labled adult. i am sorry for your weakened moral constitution.
A contest entry
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550 points, ended April 4, 12 entries
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...Another Angel Sent Home to Heaven...
what a way to go..sensuous and an
awesome write
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hugs Angel♥
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I really REALLY REALLY loved this. If you have read my poetry like "Bloody Masterpiece" and "Happy Birthday b****!" I tend to write a little more on the twisted side. I would never have thought to mix sex and murder this way. GOOOOOOOD job! Thank you for your entry
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Thanks for your kind words. It isn't every reader that can appreciate my personal insanity let alone enjoy it as much as you did. I am honored by your praise.
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Your right not everyone can handle this style of twisted fantasy writing. But I can and I LOVE it. I still LOVE this piece. Its good. Better than good this is great and I love it. Sorry this must be strange to hear from a total stranger but I love it.
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yeah i dont know u cleary, but y base this just on stuff u hear?
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its not 100% based off of things i hear. i read a book (angels and demons) that made mention of the fatal technique used....that got it started. then a few rough (and some dirty) movies that amused me and a couple songs (canible corpse?)(i laughed my ass off watching saw) followed up my already somewhat sadistic tendancies(though im also realy gentle....) and i had a dream that was oh so like what i wrote here.
so some of its me. especially the hair....i like long hair, soft and wavy....red is a good color too.
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Woah...this is so twisted I almost cried with joy haha...Okay not really, but it's a nice thought.
Is it sad and sick that I find this extremely relatable? (and it's not what you think haha) Anyhoo...sweet and sour poem. Good luck in the contest
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GREAT!!!!!
Heya! Wow This was an amazing poem and I enjoyed reading this! It was powerful and amazing and I could feel every emotion present..this is DEFINETLY what I was looking for in this contest! You have written an amazing poem and I enjoyed reading this. It kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through until the end. It flowed well to. Keep writting your talented, thank you for entering my contest and good luck
~Chrissy~
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lol. i love your author comments!! this poem was very sad in a weird kind of way. i did not think rapist as i read it, i only thought: crazy bastard who murders at the peak of pleasure!! lol. just kidding. it was a good write. good luck in the contest.
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