In the deep depths of devils wood
Lives a creature looking for blood
Disfigured, cruel and mean
She will appear before as your
Perfect dream
But beware!
Step into this wood if you dare
Her eyes burn with a white cold stare
She will follow you were ever you go
Tracking you down in the undergrowth
Appearing before you a damsel so fair
Seeking your help
She will lead you into her bloody lair
Stepping inside your blood will run cold
At the horror about to unfold
Transforming in front of your eyes
Her white cold stare will hypnotise
Before you know it you will be dead
As she grabs your neck and rips off your head.
A contest entry
- I WANT SOMETHING DARK AND SCARY AND FRIGHTENING by esroddo.
475 points, ended September 29, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #132 Celebrating 50 Gold's by daviscth.
450 points, ended September 9, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a wonderful scary poem. It gave me the shivers and I really liked the imagery. Thanks so much for sharing with me.
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Wow super scary write
I had chills down my spine though out the read. Thank you for entering a awesome and frighting write. and good luck.
LISA
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Wowzer
Great ending...loved it, well done on darkness! Good luck in the contest! -
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Thank you for commenting
Always valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Chills.
Now that's what I call scary. This sent chills running up and down all over me. Great work!
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Thank you for your comments
Always appreciated and valued
Love ~sugar~
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honey this was just fabolous i loved this you shook up my damn nerves with tis one this was a hellva rain fire i loved it
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Julia
Thank you for reading
Always appreciate it
Love ~sugar~
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This is really good, went and checked out the picture, you've done it justice.
Dark, scary and frightening...well done.
All the best in the contest
Love Sue
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Thank you so much
Really appreciate you reading
Love ~sugar~
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Brilliant
Wooohaahh this is great. Brilliant piece here. I love this. Brilliant imagery here. Wonderfully-written. I really enjoyed reading this.
Wayne
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Thank you babes
I thought I would give it a go
Always appreciate you reading
Love ~sugar~xx
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Woooooooooo!
I'm scared now!! Excellent write Michelle, you are better at this than you think! I vote for you for the gold, lol.
I thought my write was okay, but you blew me away with this one, great job!
BTW, you can grab my neck and rip off my head anytime you want.
I love you,
Brazos
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Oh B
What am I going to do with you?
Get here and give us your neck. LOL!!!
Thanks for reading always appreciated
Love you ~sugar~
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ewwwww....
Indeed GROSS and scary...hold on, lemme read it again with the lights off 
Loved this, so you have many talents as well, Im sure Lisa will enjoy this. Im not all that good in dark writes, but I hope to work on that, to become more flexible. Grat job
ephiphany
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Oh Piff
you do make me laugh I am LMAO!
This is my 3rd attempt.
I love it when you comment.
Love you sis ~sugar~
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Ephiphany peeks out.....
of the closet, sorry sis it took me so long to respond...thought I heard sum, so I hid
Glad you laugh, it's good for the soul
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Behave lil sis
you so make me laugh.
BOOOOOO!
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