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crucible



Nebulous gasses flare incandescent
across saturnine amethyst skies.
Blazing energy in wild cyclonic fields
erupt exposing awesome displays of power.
Vista shining forth over methane seas
dancing upon the edge of time.
Wondrous shadows guard tremulous sighs
born upon the crucible of life.
New giant with sisters entwined
embraced within galactic design.


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image - http://dinesiac.deviantart.com/art/In-The-Cradle-27353947

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    This is beautifully breathtaking! Thanks for entering


  • penman gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation of words and thoughts. So fits the prompt. Great images adorn the poem. Best of luck in the contest.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 30, 2007

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    Nicely done! Love the word choice and flow. Very creative and unquie, just like you!
    Great flow and deep meaning, thought provoking and inviting.
    Lovely!
    Best to you.
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