Asian ladybug
dresses red & black polka dots
river of colors
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Haiku, write of Insects or Birds by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 29, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very well done. Such a great haiku. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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Congrats on the honorable mention, this was adorable! But just so you know the second line is eight syllables and should only be seven.
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cute
Beautiful poem. -
Good morning
this has great imagery, a wonderful Haiku..well versed, but your counts in the second line are off as there are 8 syllables May I suggest;
Asian ladybug,
dressed, red & black polka dots;
river of colorsBest wishes, Ken IBT
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Beautiful creative imagery with this haiku.
Ladybugs make such great subjects for haiku. Very nice! I sure do love to read and write haiku.
Knight70
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bright and alive
is your lady bug and bright and alive is your poem. Few words to create a vivid image to flow in my mind. Well done.
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polka dots...
Beautiful! I stand in awe at how so much imagery can be crammed in to so few words! Good luck in the contest!
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