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organic army

a praying mantis
in green alien armor
summer bug catcher

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"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    March 28, 2008
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    you are fine in this form maggie well done xx


  • penman gold member
    October 23, 2007

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    Excellent

    Very well done. A great haiku. You are so good at these. Congratulations for your honorable mention.


  • Swan song gold member
    October 18, 2007
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    Awesome! What a lovely haiku

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 29, 2007

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    thank you for your Haiku A wonderful picture you have presented. I can clearly see this as I have seen many of the little critters! Nice for, flow & counts..best wishes, Ken IBT

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