Just once more
to taste her
secretly
Unlawful, I know
But the sweet grapes
taste better
than the aged wine
Author notes
Ok, this is option 5 (Forbidden) I'm not sure why I wrote this. Perhaps my ex-teacher came to mind and his minglings with a fellow student...
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wow. This is really good. And a relationship with a teacher is DEFFINATELY forbidden. I think my favorite parts would have to be ...
But the sweet grapes
taste better
than the aged wine
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan -
Not bad. Short and to the point. I admit that I had a thing for a teacher but yeah don't some of us at one point. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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This contest is all about actitude, that's how a person acts. Our minds more often than not dictate our actions. Although this is quite the sinister work, it reads like the beginnings of a short story or novel. Excellent work poet! This teacher should be barred from ever being around children. Excellent take on the prompt. I wish you the best in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Oh my oh my...*hides eyes* this was indeed a piece of work. I actually like the thought in this one. bravo
good luck to you in this contest.
tory
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