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If you really knew me, you wouldn't be saying those things

She medicates
with morphine and
love.
The confession

she longs to make,

buried

deep within

a soul of painful

admiration...

sexual lust

and degredation.

A picture perfect plastic

society,

...crowing her queen of the sluts,

she's exposed.

The bloody hand

holding a beating heart.

She. has. no. feeling.

She's addicted

to the fast paced life,

passing out

with lines of coke

and bottles of alcohol

in her system.

Tattoos cover her body,

stories of pain

and horror inked into her soul.

She looked into the mirror,

froze...and cried.

Innocence streaming down her cheeks

when she realized

it was all over.

 

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  • Carolyn
    June 11
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    the flow of this is great. its such a vivid image in my head. this really is great.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 20, 2007

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    Another excellent piece them dang drug's an alcohol just crap. I drank for awhile, God was it terrible. But My husband got me through it.


  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    October 2, 2007

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    very well worded, and your flow is fantastic I loved your ending! the imagery is again fab, and I enjoyed this very much


  • Uniquely-Scarred gold member
    September 30, 2007
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    this i great too same sort of feeling as the last one i read yeah gret writing (: