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September Song

It's that time of year
When the wild geese fly
When the sun shines through
A crystal sky

When the autumn wind
Blows through the trees
When the pathways are
A carpet of gold leaves

That time of year
When the streams gush along
And i will sing
This September song

It's that time of year
When the wind wolves howl
When the forest floor echoes
The hoot of the owl

When the trees are bare
When the lilies bloom
When the grass grows brown
'Neath a harvest moon

That time of year
When the nights are so long
So i will sing
This September song.

That time of year
When nothing goes wrong
And i will sing
My September song.

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  • daviscth silver member
    July 3, 2008

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    This is a wonderful poem overflowing with vivid imagery. Thanks so much for including it in my contest.


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 22, 2008
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    Ah, how very Longfellow and Frost. very nice work.


  • januaryrain gold member
    February 28, 2008
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    Beautiful, I love it, paints a beautiful autumn picture


  • storiesuntold gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    Lovely write

    I so enjoyed this for it gave the ready such a beautiful vision and the sounds of the wild . Great write here


  • lesbian-in-love
    November 20, 2007

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    Autumn is a very beautiful season. This piece was nicely done. Thanks so much for entering and good luck.

  • soccer220
    November 6, 2007

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    Wow.. this is great! Your rhyming is awesome, and it doesn't sound forced at all! The stanzas are a little short, but this poem is so good, it doesn't matter! Thanks a ton for entering and good luck!


  • HopeWithWings
    September 28, 2007
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    This is beautiful! Thanks for entering this contest and writing this, good luck!

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