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Assimalate Me...

 

 

I've had Klingon's on the starboard side,

Lt. Paris to name a few.

But never have I seen such beauty,

As the beauty I see in you.

 

You make my warp core burn at night,

You really make it so.

My phaser bank is over loaded,

Warp Nine, I'm going to blow.

 

Many Vulcan's have joined the Q,

But can never hold a light to you.

So take me to you're continuum,

Consume me, assimilate me now.

 

My resistance is so futile,

Seven of Nine can you not tell.

Take me to your Collective,

You really must comply.

 

Put me in your Sphere I beg you,

Oh Seven, Seven of Nine.

Put us in the Sphere together,

Assimilate this lust forever.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Option Six: Give me your best prewrite

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Comments

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  • know one
    August 11, 2008
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    awesome

    thanks for entering


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    June 14, 2008

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    Awww this is a charming piece, very strong and well crafted. I loved the way you opened it, it was such a surprise to learn the topic.


  • Luckintheshadows
    May 14, 2008

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    omg...this made me smile!!! I just love the way you've written this...

    Thanks for sharing,

    Luck.


  • Florida Sunshine
    February 3, 2008

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    Well anyone who watch the enterprise ~ would certainly enjoy the write ~ the meter of this moves straight through ~ wanting more ~ Good job ~ very enjoyable ~

    Thanks for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ I really appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ best of luck to you.


    • Timespell
      February 28, 2008
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      Thanks for awarding my "TREKKIE POEM" with your HM.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • fairytalelovestory
    December 30, 2007
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    cool


    • Timespell
      December 31, 2007
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      Thanks for reading glad you liked this one.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • opaqueangel
    November 11, 2007

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    OMGs!!!! What can I say about this peice really? I loved it so much!!!!! Seven of Nine is like my fav. and she is so hot!!!! I have never read a peice like this before, it is so original! I love the idea behind it and it was very well written. It made me giggle! My favorite line is:"My phaser bank is over loaded,
    Warp Nine, I'm going to blow." But I really did love the whole thing! So amazing!!!!!! Great job and thanks for entering my contest! Good luck!

    • Timespell
      November 12, 2007
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      Thanks

      LOL... glad you like this poem of mine. Yes Seven of Nine really made a big impression on me when she entered the scene... Got to love those "BORG"

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

  • vacant lot
    October 18, 2007

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    lmao, I don't know if you're a trekkie or a star wars fan (not into science fiction) but this was pretty good. It was adorably dorky. thats sounds dumb as anything but its what I think. well anyway thanks and good luck.


  • Cirket
    October 3, 2007

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    I am Complying!

    OWW>> I love StarTreck! And of course this poem!! Man does that guy have the hots for Seven of Nine(or is that the wrong out take?).Well if I had anything to say about it im sure I would not have to say anything bc the borg love to assimalate people. Great poem. Really funny!!!! I give you claps in my mind *clap clap clap clap* see??


    • Timespell
      October 3, 2007

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      Thank you

      Thanks again, Yeah... i would say he does...LOL
      Just a fun poem which was fun to write.

      All the best

      ~T.S~

      • Cirket
        October 3, 2007
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        ya that was a fun poem to read so i can just imagine... i thought that was what the guy was feeling! all the best to u to dude...


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 3, 2007

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    commander of words and imagery

    and so smartly done! This would be another poem that
    I can read by a lighted candle darkening the room so
    they could hear the message clear. Thankyou for this
    entry! judging will come soon.
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen


    • Timespell
      October 3, 2007
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      Thanking you for reading and taking time to comment.
      Much appreciated.

      All the best.

      ~T.S~


  • warrior-eagle
    October 2, 2007

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    This was a fun and very interesting poem Its nice too, and very mm different may i say? Great.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    September 28, 2007

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    LOL Well, if you hadn't found a way to assimilate with 7 of 9 I would have begun to wonder. LOL. OH this was just fun. Nice work my friend. ~Pamela


  • ghostwriter28
    September 27, 2007
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    great!!

    LOL this poem was really funny I liked it!!! keep up the great writing


    • Timespell
      September 27, 2007
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      Cheers, You've got to love Seven of Nine... She really was a breast of fresh air!!

      All the best

      ~T.S~

  • Florida Sunshine
    September 27, 2007
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    OH MY GAWD!!!! This is just tooo GOOD! ~~ I'm rolling on the floor~ and yes I had to spell it all out cause it worth it... OMG!!! OK... This is OVER THE TOP GOOD! ~ good luck to you ~ Perfect out of the box yet still completely in it take on the prompts provided!!! NICE JOB! Woot ! you got my vote... Dang I'm going to read it again~

    • Timespell
      September 27, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thank you for your nice comment, Well I have given it my best shot... Must admit I did have fun writing this poem.

      All the best

      ~T.S~

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