In glacial scenes so bleak and raw
appears a crispness of intensity
protecting all that sleeps below
with nature's cycle endlessly rotating.
In frigid vista eye views in awe
for truly this panorama is perfection
stately queen in regal gown
in covers of pristine dignity.
A sky reflects on golden pond
snow laden trees contemplate their purpose
meditating within tranquil pool
yet conscious of the living cycle.
In reverence is this cycle caught
as soul is warmed with wondrous vision
what first appears most desolate
gives spirit true serenity.
In voices soft and comforting
queen murmurs songs of haven's guard
until sun renews with gracious warmth
all is sheltered within her grasp.
In a list
A contest entry
- Q IS FOR QUASI....Likenesses of Life on Way to Z by BLUE REW by Blue Rew.
1470 points, ended October 1, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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YOu have painted this vision in tones of serenity and spirituality...just so soft and beautiful. Excellent flow and construction leading us down the page to inhale the next vision. Thank-you for this read!
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Your third stanza simply rocks. This is just excellent. So vivid and pure and beautiful. I loved it from top to bottom. Well done.
~Pamela 
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wow u amaze me again, wonderfully written and very powerful words.
well done and good luck!
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this was an amazing write and so beautifully writtne woith power and strength
well done and best of luck
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