The bloomed flowers everywhere,
The cool breezes around
A magical place to just relax
Blossoming from out of the ground
Lovely natural scenery,
Almost everywhere you step
In this flawless image of hope,
Is a surprising secret.. kept
The rain begins to fall,
As the sun begins to shine
There goes Spring leaving us,
With all the beautiful memories left behind
In comes the Summer,
With the calming heat of the day
The tranquille nights have just passed by,
And have already slipped away
Down at the beach where couples relax,
Is a peaceful home of grace
To feel at ease and reflect on life,
It's just the perfect place
Precious moments of priceless memoirs,
Deep into our mind
With gentle sways of different beauty,
And an image so hard to find
As the sun begins to set,
And the moon begins to rise
Here comes Autumn right ahead,
What a wonderful surprise!
Leaves of different colours,
Gentley falling like dainty angels from the sky
Leaving marks of Autumns beauty,
And never wanting to say goodbye
Gorgeous fades of radiant colours,
Dance into our head
With symbolic movements of every sort,
A soft word left unsaid
As the grass begins to die,
And the trees become bare
In rolls the Winter
As we are all prepared
White sparkly snow on the ground,
And crisp air flowing through the wind
It almost whispers a gentle song,
That always leaves you in a soft grin
In this wonderland of pure beauty,
Lies a story for every living thing
With a never ending fairytale of truth,
To see what these seasons may bring
This beautiful change of hope,
Is a miracle from within
That keeps going on repeatedly,
Until Spring starts all over again
Author notes
I wrote this poem for a contest and a picture inspiration.
A contest entry
- Prompt - in Exactly 100 words by 2lullabyhaven.
425 points, ended October 10, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*(~*~(~*~PRE WRITES OK!!!!!(~*~(~*~(SOMETHING SAD.....HEART TUGGING.....SOMETHING FULL OF FEELING.....NOTHING GROSS PLEASE!!! NO GORE THATS NOT SAD!!!! by xxlisajazminexx.
425 points, ended October 1, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Inspire me by Procrastination.
330 points, ended October 3, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Unsung Prewrites by Shahrazad.
600 points, ended October 7, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ONLY Pre-Writes that should have won a trophy. by lindaburns.
1700 points, ended October 4, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Butterflies Flutter By by whispernthedark.
675 points, ended May 17, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What Do You Think?
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You took this throughout the year wonderfully. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Hmm I see where you got the inspiration from to write this poem...............ME! haha I have written one similar to this, same background.. but that's what true poets do is be inspired by fellow poets & take in a little bit of everything; nature, love, remorse, guilt, honesty, friendships.. and the list goes on
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I really liked this poem, very well worded, and the flow was quite good. I liked this stanza best:
Precious moments of priceless memoirs,
Deep into our mind
With gentle sways of different beauty,
And an image so hard to find
You have a great hold on the emotion, and subject. Great work,
KP -
lovely
Well written. Good rhyming and good flow. -
Wow
A lovely poem, but it exceeds my wordage limit, I asked for a poem in exactly 100 words...sorry for the misunderstanding. -
Thank you for entering my contest. Very good use of imagery and timing. Following the course of a year, this poem presents a very balanced view of the changing of seasons as well as a simplistic approach to dealing with that change. Acknowledge the change, prepare for it, life goes on, embrace it. Good job.
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My first thought after reading this was of William Wordsworth- being that you focused on nature. Twas very lovely and soothing to the tongue. Thanks for entering it in the contest!
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This poem creates some beautiful imagery, I especially liked 'Leaves of different colours, Gently falling like dainty angels from the sky'
Good luck in the contest.
Chemical Kisses,
Emily x -
Please re-read the rules regarding the pre-writes and if you have questions, ask; will return with proper comment
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colorfully written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wonderful write you have penned here............. i want to thank you for entering it into my contest!........... though it seems so uplifting than sad..... beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
Hi:
This is a wonderful piece.....
Thank you for entering our contest, and good luck to you.....
AngelicMistress...Tanya & B. Chandler
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