Fuck making love I want fuck tonight.
We can do the strawberries and whipped cream another night.
For tonight hand cuffs and whips is what we playing with.
I want you to tie me up and take control.
You know I down for whatever baby it’s your show.
Rip my panties because I was slow taking them off.
Pull my hair while you push me down into doggy style.
Pound the bottom out of my pussy until it’s nice and swollen.
Throw me up against the wall you know I like that shit.
Take hard long strokes that make me cry out your name.
I love to hear your grunting as you go so deep within.
Make me hold on to the dress to keep my balance.
As you rip into me uncontrollably.
I cry out with every strokes but I cry in pleasure.
I yell at you to fuck me harder.
You yell back at me and said shut up bitch I got this.
That’s what I’m talking about you know I love that shit.
Call me another bitch while you tainting that pussy.
You’re fucking me so good I don’t want to stop.
But I could feel myself cumin damn what the fuck.
You still going strong and 5 minutes later.
I could feel your warm cream as you explore inside of me.
Now that’s was some hardcore fuckingBy: Levesta
In a list
A contest entry
- Everything Erotica! by Lost-Rose-Petal.
360 points, ended November 22, 2007, 46 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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NASTY
YOU ARE A REAL FREAK GIRL, BUT UR SHIT IS GOOD....SOMEONE NEEDS TO GET PAID FOR THESE WORDS...LOL....U THE BOMB
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Ohhhhh It's too early to be this horny. Girl you got the gift of fucking to a tee. I got some catching up to do. lol Excellent
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its never to early unless you by yourself lol thanks Ms sexy
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get it all out
Slurpy. You capture the motion where lust meets being… embrace the wet, lions mating, a vicious passion… sometimes we have to fuck, not make love -
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thanks love glad u enjoy hpe u come back soon
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Yes..It was 'some hardcore fucking'.....
You looked gorgeous while tied up.....
your panties being ripped because you were 'so slow taking themoff'...
with your bottom 'nice and swollen'...
your hair being pulled...
and you thrown 'up against the wall'...
holding on to my dress 'to keep' your 'balance'...
crying 'in pleasure'...
your 'inside' being explored...
and you 'yelling' while being fucked 'harder'...
You played your role so grandly, my love!
You do it so swell...so amazingly well. honey!
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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wow sis this was hot i loved it nice job
love love love your stuff
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"Rip my panties because I was slow taking them off
Pull my hair while you push down into doggy style
Pound the bottom of my pussy....................
Throw me against the wall.......................
Make me hold on to the dress to keep my balance"
Wonderfully erotic.......
excellently imaginative......
testable and enjoyable.....
You know no inhibitions, sweetie...and I love you for that...
Thanks for giving me a lot of pleasure
Erotic kisses!....
Galaxy2
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THANKS MY LOVE
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Not very good, I have to say. About as erotic as being beaten on the head with a dead fish. But I love the idea of people yelling at each other during sex, that is very funny and deserves a clap. And it took all of five minutes as well. I am impressed you managed not to get the title banned as usually the moderators insist on titles being suitable to be read by everyone including kiddy-winkies. If you would like to read something REALLY erotic, why not try: hhtp://www.allpoetry.com/poem/1407600 ....
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I see, freaky, freaky deaky. Good stuff. It is so sad that I strongly believe that action speaks louder than words. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing. Are you that... Anyway, I'm trippin'. What a lucky man is that man, a woman who's not boring, determined and definitely can rock .... well. It ain't hard to tell.
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thank you love
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Intense
You too much for me. I think that you have a way with words. I mean like damn, you really know how to make that shit seem real as it's being read. This is poetry and this is talent. Please continue to do what you do and maybe if it is possible we can do a collabo. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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well thank you i glad I caught your attention
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needs some work but you're on the right track
the Satyr
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really
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Wow! Is this HOT or what?!?!?!?!?
Steamy, sexy and sensual to the MAX!
All the best to you in this contest!!! -
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thank you
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Excellent!! this is great I wish you the best of luck in the contest Though I don't think you'll need in .
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thank you
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*mouth hangs open*
*catches breath*
wow....
That was freakin amazing!
First line..right there...bam i was in!
Soo perfect! exactly what i wanted!
Thats my kinda sex lol
Wow...definitly thumbs up to u! Dont even think i need to wish good luck in my contest lol
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glad you enjoy it
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Fuck making love I want fuck tonight.
We can do the strawberries and whipped cream another night.
For tonight hand cuffs and whips is what we playing with.
another great poem! i'm adding you as a fave!
this one was raw and exciting, not to mention energetic and naughty
you really have a great way with this particular genre
(and, like me, you need to work on typos...i orgasam all over the words i write and forget to read over...hey, it happens) -
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thank you
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i like this alot
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glad you do
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Was there a full moon last night,LOL
Sinasaur Dinosaur!
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Yes, I'd say that is hardcore fucking. I loved this. All of this. Great job!
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thanks for taking the time to read my poems and thank for the in put appreciate it truly much love vee
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i always see you view my work so i am comming to be noisy exept i am letting my presence be known as that is just me baby i like this and be cause i do i will tell you what you can do to fix this ok*hug first problem i saw and i do it to so no problem because i type fast
1. I want you to tired me up and take control
tie me up.
you have that hood shit to you that i like but when you doin hood shit this is whats up right here
2.You know I down for whatever baby it’s your show.
2 ways to mess with this
ya know I' m down for what ever
you know that I am down for what ever.
3.Rip my panties because I was slow taking them off.
rip my panties off because tonight i want you to take them off slow(( my suggestion)) urs in correct form
rip my panties off because I want you to take them off slow.
4.Pull my hair while you push me down into doggy style.
seperate in to
5.I cry out with every strokes but I cry in pleasure.
my suggestion then i will give you yours in correct form
As you stroke me in long strokes i cry in squirm in deep pleasure..
yours
I cry out to you with the strokes of your good pleasure
really that linbe just need to be rivised
other than that you can damn near run neck to neck with me slow down and get in to your sex when you get good i will be the one telling you that you got me wet not in a bad way but i am certified in bitches and niggaz so i will tell you that you impressed me
jewels
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okkkkkaaaaaayyyyy
you know I'm lovin this lil sister...you held this down for the audience 
great imagery from start to finish...wow
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angain i want to think 4 taking the time and reading my poem
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two amazing lines
We can do the strawberries and whip cream another night.
You yell back at me and shut up bitch I got this.
amazing
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thank you for the comment
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