Mama tell me do you love me
why you look like that at me
have I do any wrong for you to hurt me
do I really deserve that you kill me
Mama why I cant remember a day
where you and I have ever play
and why my memories only show the way
you've always beat me and drown me in the bay
I love you mama can you hear what I say
why you are not moving let's run away
I promise I'll be good and I will pray
believe me I'm not the devil let me stay
Mama do you love me please stop the rain
mama tell me do you feel my pain
that's how I'm gonna feel if you leave me again
oh mama I didn't mean to hurt you and cut your vein
A contest entry
- Waves of Emotion by Blooming Poet.
345 points, ended February 3, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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it's good one
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not bad but u can write a poeme more impressive
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Very emotional piece...reminds me of "The Child Called It" very sad, good piece!
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this is interesting but please change the color of the font so we can read it properly
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I hope the font is now better and I'm happy that you find it interesting thank you for your comment
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hello yes this font is much better thank you for your comments on my work
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OMGSH. This was sad. very emotional and personal.
I'm really sorry.
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Very painful. My mom loves me too much, but I can still feel this way with her unacceptance of my ways. Beautiful write.
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This is very expressive and I can feel exacttly what you are feeling.
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This poem hurt me to read. Though painful, it is beautiful because it is your soul's cry for a mother's love. Amazing write. Very emotional, very raw, and very real.
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Deep
IT is deep and it hits to heart so deep you can make any one feel how you do keep goin !!!!!!!!!!!
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Holy Deepness of my life! It's so- legit.
Thanks for reading- and understanding my poem.
Keeping writing I'll be stopping in to see more.
Lyzie.
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thank you.
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