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Jack


I see you, yes I do,
You put a spell on me;
Trapping me next to you.

I might be out of sight,
But always on your mind.

 

I am the burning lantern,

Watching through the night.

 

Remember my name,

"Jack O Lantern"

Who paid the lustful price... 

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  • leander Moderators member
    October 26, 2007

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    Jack-o-lantern He's quite a funny creature if you ask me, a tiny - floating piece of cloth with a huge pumpkin head

    Anyway, I quite like the personification you have used to write this poem here well done!

    Leander


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 27, 2007

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    LOL, and one can only imagine just what that price was!
    Good take on the picture.
    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm


    • Timespell
      September 28, 2007
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      Thanks again Storm, It's always fun entering your contests

      All the best,

      ~T.S~