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Annoyances (Haiku)





Small busybodies
stick noses where not wanted:
ensuring new life.

©2007
9-27-07

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."


Written for the contest: Contest Haiku, write of Insects or Birds by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2370688

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 29, 2007

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    Thank you for your Haiku, it is filled with vivid imagery I can see this happening as I live near water and it is filled with many different insects!Grreat form and flow..and counts..best wishes, Ken IBT


    • Elrenia
      September 29, 2007
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      Thank you for the applauds. And the comment. Both were appreciated.

      rous