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The Encounter

Energy - leaves us breathless,
Passion - so wild and reckless-
Desire - intent and needing,
Emotion - flames we're feeding.

Electricity ignites the senses,
Destroying all of our past defenses.

And when all is said and done-
Once were two and now as one,
Boundless wonder all of this-
Started with a simple kiss!

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  • mosher93
    August 12

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    Awesome! I love how you did this. You get the reader wondering "where is she going with this?" because you have an open field of where you could of took it. The curiosity keeps them hooked. I love it.