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Blessings





Plentiful harvest
Fruitfully gleaned, safe within:
Bounty for futures.

Bright shining jars upon shelves,
Rattling dried veggies hung.





©2007




Author notes

Written for the contest: Contest Autumn Tanka by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2370498

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 2, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry, your Tanka is filled with vivid images of the harvest season. Nice form and counts, best wishes, Ken IBT