she's my second mom
best of friends we have become
now that she's my X
In a list
A contest entry
- The Mother-In-Law Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended October 15, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Brillant
she's my second mom
best of friends we have become
now that she's my X
You are too clever
CooL
Rick
PS: your making some great backgrounds
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Wonderful you feel close with her. Sweet little Haiku.
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Beautiful
What a sweet and touching haiku. best of luck in the contest.
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Nice
this is a very interesting poem all round with the way it is worded and the over all strucutre but I enjoy it and love it alot. very nice work and keep it up
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LMAo i just said this in a comment to one earlier..indeed always better when they become the ex...
shew what a piece.
well done best wishes to you
Tory -
Great haiku. Loving stage set in lines 1 and 2, then the 'reveal' with the explanation of how things improved! Sometimes we are naievely or willingly blind to the faults of those we love. Having them move back home is a great refresher course!
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lol.even better
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Really laughing...So you sent the EX home to live with his Mom, huh?
Great border-background--I actually read "Mon" as "Mom" at first!
Thanks again for this entry to the contest, Brenda.
Jo
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Oh my, sometimes you can become best friends even after the one bond is no more. Thank you so much for your haiku! I love your border!
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