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Mother-In-Law (haiku)

never be alone
Dr Jeckyll in disguise
proceed with caution

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most are fabulous
but some are down right evil..

pic: http://www.the-jersey-lilly-of-clutterbuck.com/mother_in_law.jpg

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  • Never Fall in Love
    October 19, 2007
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    haha ... I've always heard of mother-in-laws being extreme torture ..
    It happens especially in religious cultures where that same person is in charge of the whole household - so you can just sit and imagine that.

    This was very enjoying to read.

    All the best and keep writing,
    Never ♥


  • penman gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    Whew!

    Now that sounds like my mother in law. Great job. Best of luck in the contest.


  • between slices
    October 12, 2007

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    gosh... this really cracked me up.. it reminds me of the stereotyped Indian Mother-In-Laws.. and the way the media promotes the goody ones..
    but yeah, some sure are...
    witty... thanks for the laugh!


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 8, 2007

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    clever

    that is quite a clever poem and I really like this alot. what really impresse dme was how well pennedit was ans the pic is quite cool. any ways very well penned all round and keep up the good work


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 5, 2007

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    dr jeckyll indeed and i would go and Hyde lmao.
    well done here.
    best wishes to you in this contest.
    Tory


  • Mirthryl
    October 2, 2007

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    There are definitely evil people in the world, and some of them grow up to be 'mothers-in-law'! Truly FABULOUS pic! Sorry you experienced first-hand...


  • Nicotine Eyes
    September 30, 2007
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    lol.this is funny.


  • NoWayJo
    September 29, 2007
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    Gosh, Brenda, do I know the evil-type! Not necessarily evil when I met 'em, but by the time I got rid of 'em--(well, ridded myself of their sons that is), they were mean!

    Great haiku and absolutely perfect image too! Thanks so much for this entry to the contest.

    Jo


  • azure85 gold member
    September 28, 2007

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    LOL Oh, this one made me laugh, and the graphic! Your author's notes are great, you never know which type of mother-in-law you might get! Thank you for your haiku!

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