dark-haired lover
your head on
my pillow
I feel your skin
on mine
your heat
your silkiness
the way your lips are parted
as you sleep
the beauty of your calmness
the way
i fall in love
with just a gaze
the sun left jealous
of your beauty
I want to touch you
but unable to
frozen
by my sleeping beauty
Steven Mels
Author notes
an attempted at feeling something ...
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This was absolutely beautiful in all ways..especially read in the morning!
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hey thank u for taking the time to read and comment.. i am glad u liked it
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This is a lovely write with such beautiful imagery. You have painted a wonderful picture in my head as I was reading this. I loved the lines "the sun left jealous of your beauty". This is such a wonderful line.
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Enlightening
This is so sweet and uplifting until the last line where you are frozen in time from the one you love.
Beautiful son!
Mama Linda
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THIS IS SO LOVELY!!!
I know myself sometimes I find myself admiring and feeling the beauty of a lady but not able to open up and speak to her.
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Sweetie, I would say this is beautifully romantic and wonderfully, tastefully sensual
I loved every line
Hope all is well with you!
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I like this write, sweet and sensual, romantic too.
very well written well done xx
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