autumn slides freely
towards the coming cold months
wishes change color
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Haiku II by InBetweenThoughts Finalist of previous contest only, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2370440 by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!
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this was beautifully written and reallly creates a strong vivid image in the readers mind
well done and best of luck
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Wonderfully penned! A hopeful array of thought brushed inside. Beautiful! Best wishes in the contest!
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