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Haiku 11

fall leaves transfigure
golden hues beckoning change
to undo the past

Author notes

I was told to put this here:
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 1, 2007
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    Thank you for your patience and for resubmitting your poem!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    September 27, 2007

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    this was a wonderful write weaved withnice thoughts
    it held strong vivid imagery and was beautifully done
    best of luck


  • PerfectImperfection
    September 27, 2007

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    Very nice thoughts woven within! A very endearing piece you have penned here. Best wishes in the contest!