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Bleed

Bleed.
Let me bleed,
see red, scarlet mar my skin.
Let me feel the pull of death.
Feel blood leaving my veins.
Let me drown in my life, literally;
shove my face in my pool of death.
A trap of my own set.
Let me choke and cough,
Let me sputter dieing words.
The bitterness is a sweet longing,
Let if wash over my tongue.
The metallic tang of truth,

Let me bleed.
Watch as my life spills to the floor.
Watch it with me.
Drink with me.
Drown, and die with me.
Bleed with me,

Bleed.

 

Together we live one eternal

Life of passion's dreams.

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Oddly enough the weirdest things come from my head when I'm in a happier mood. so the ending might throw some you off a bit. Tell me if you think you know what it is about.

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  • DarkRomantic113
    October 3, 2007
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    First off, this picture rocks!

    I think this poem about being misunderstood and giving up on people trying to help you. This poem just screamed "leave me alone" or "join me in misery. It seemed like the girl has known only this form of lifestyle so it's her form of identity. This poem is about loss...very beautiful.