I have loved
you
through
echoed shadows
of consecutive
yews
apricots and pears
sunfleshed
and warmly
ripe
two plums
plucked
from shivered
boughs
almond buds
moonscaling
whitely
frail
through
touch
of
you
I have loved
A contest entry
- Poetry by FindingFaith.
300 points, ended October 5, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This was well written. Just personal opinion that the you before the last line should be next to of. Then the last line would stand alone as...I have loved. Nice piece. Best wihses and God Bless...
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Vivid imagery, engages the reader to conceptualize your words in thier context. Thanks for the exercise!
Well Done!
Dennis
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indeed, i have loved.
i adore the wholly expression of self when it comes down to love.
much Love.
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So gentle the words,
so fresh the images,
this wonderful
expression of love.
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I have loved
you
through
echoed shadows
of consecutive
yews
these lines are most beautiful they speak of true loving of another you did an excellent job and i wish you the best in this contest
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