Down in the valley were my soul lyes
There are many things that lift me up
Both God and Jesus, have done there share
My parents they sent me on the right road
My Sisters and brother have always been there
When I 'd get lost along the way
So many friends have crossed my path
I've been bless with the love they gave
I had a love once she gave me children
My children are my lifes blood
I'll never be able to say
The pleasures that they gave
But now I'm lost and my heart weaps
of all the things that my soul needs
only one is you, only one is true
I find you one day and change this line
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Still looking, are you the one to change that last line.
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Profound...
This speaks volumes... A poet you are and a poet you shall always be, and love lies within the heart-and-soul of thee... Peace ~ Me 
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excellent
You have written of all the many blessing that life can give us. With faith to hold on when the path is dark, Parents to set you on the right path, brothers and sisters who are there to offer support and comfort. Children who even at their worst bring life so much joy and pleasure. But your last verse jumps to the heart, But now I'm lost and my heart weeps, of all the things that my soul needs, only one is you, only one is true..it is like you have reached in and read my heart..If you are still looking I hope you find the one to answer that question and change that last line. For the one who does will be one lucky lady. Cause she will have the heart of a tender loving man. Beautiful write!!
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